Thread:Fossiliferous/@comment-27234821-20151127225337/@comment-27234821-20151130232603

Section three – This is another section that, because of the table, will require significant editing when new pages are added. Here is another spot where I think a visual enhancement would be helpful. Just as section two has a header “Details of this collection”, adding the header “Collection Items” here would immediately help the reader to identify what information this section contains. I would also recommend having all of the text information about collection items located before the table and changing the column title “Quest to find item” to “Quest Name”. After these changes, the section would appear as follows:

“Collection Items

The following is a detailed list of each item in this collection, including where the item can be won through normal play, the name and location of the quest associated with the item, and whether or not the item has a green plus sign.

Collection items with a green plus sign can be added to your wishlist to indicate to your friends that you need the item. You can also gift these collection items to your friends, either directly from their wishlist or through the 'Send a collection item' tab in the gifting window for that friend. All collection items gifted to friends will come out of your inventory.

Collection items without a green plus sign can not be added to your wishlist or gifted to friends. It does not matter how many of that item you have in your inventory. If the item does not have a green plus sign next to it, it will not appear in the 'Send a collection item' tab in the gifting window. It is impossible to send or receive items that do not have a green plus sign.

[Table of Collection Items]"

Section four - When I first started reviewing the collection pages, the table in this section had the most inconsistencies; however, I see that you have recently edited the table to include only three columns. I wholeheartedly agree with that decision, in fact, I planned to suggest removing two of the three columns you removed. Given the fact that all of the combining elements can be purchased in the Shop and all have a green plus sign, having those two columns on every page is unnecessary, when a simple statement can accomplish the same goal. I was also glad to see the removal of the “Rewarded for completing awards” column. The few combining elements that are rewarded for completing awards don’t justify a column on every collection page. The presentation of that information is probably best presented on the Awards page. By removing those three columns, the table looks really clean now. The remaining suggestions that I had for this section include adding the header “Combining Elements” and having all of the text information above the combining elements before the table. Incorporating these changes, the section would appear as follows:

“Combining Elements

The following is a list of the combining elements that are required in order to combine this collection. For each combining element, it shows how many are required each time you combine a collection and where the combining element can be found in the game.

As of the 2015 Halloween Update (October, 2015), all combining elements have a green plus sign, which means they can be added to your wishlist and gifted to friends. All combining elements gifted to friends count as a free gift and do not come out of your inventory.

[Table of Combining Elements]"

Section five – I would assume that this section should be identical for all of the collection pages, so once a complete list of related links and categories is determined, no editing should be required in this section. What is the criteria for determining which links and categories are listed in this section?

Those are my observations and suggestions for the collection page. If I get a chance after dinner this evening, I will add the next collection page and incorporate these changes. That way, you can visually see how the page will look with the changes I have suggested. If you like it, we can go from there to begin adding more pages, if not, then we can always re-edit the page.

Last, but not least, I have a question relating to the collection pictures. Are there pictures of all of the collections in the photos section, or is that something that still needs to be added? If they are already uploaded, is there a specific naming convention that you used to identify each collection, so that I could add them to the page before I publish it?

Thanks!