Thread:Fossiliferous/@comment-27234821-20151127225337/@comment-27234821-20151130031854

Second section – Although this section is small, all items in the table will need to be edited for each new page that is added; therefore, any extra editing that can be eliminated would save time and effort. I would suggest the following layout for this section.

“Details of this Collection

(collection name can be inserted here) is a collection that can be combined in the game. Combining this collection creates the (name of item created by combining) which is one of five completed Collection Items needed in order to create the (name of Artefact here).

[Table of Collection]”

I only had a few minor suggestions for this section. By changing this section’s header from “(Collection Name) Details” to “Details of this Collection” or something similar, it would eliminate the need to edit the collection name in the section header for each new page that is added. Again, since each collection page is dedicated to a single collection, and the collection name is shown at the top of the page, to repeat the name in this header is not necessary. I would also move the first sentence that’s currently in section one to this section, where the details about the collection are located. In addition, if the collection is used to create an Artefact, that statement will be included in the paragraph before the table. The only other comment that I have about this section has to do with the table. While reviewing this section of the existing collection pages, I noticed an inconsistency. One of the existing collection pages (Banker’s Treasure) has a column titled “Combining Quest”. Should that column be included on all of the collections pages or should it be removed from that one page?

It’s getting late here, so I’ll post my notes on the next section tomorrow.